In This Perfect World

by *~Katie~*   Aug 7, 2005


You think you know me
But you have no idea
Alls you know
Are the emotions I share
You think you can judge me
And call me names
I’m a freak, a monster
And no one cares
You make me like this
You make me feel so dead
I make it numb
With every last cut
Ill put myself down
Ill sell myself short
One day you’ll notice
What you all have done
You made a once happy girl
This dark sad silhouette
In this perfect world

Not one of my best but its what i feel........plz read, rate, and post it will take 2 mins

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  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was really cute, great emotion in it too, xoxo Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Great poem. great use of words and emotion! keep strong and im me if u eva wanna chat my msn is hi_how_r_u_16@hotmail.com
    love jess XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Awwwwww! ^_^ great job, i love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    That honestly was very good! I felt the pain and emotion and i love the wording and description! Great JoB!

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    That was very good, nice word choice and excellent emotions!!

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