by bucky Aug 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
If everything started to fall |
it stole my attention, very good! keep it up. |
by Garrett
Eh. Pretty good. Keep working on it. (The uneven stanzas, mostly) |
by jencam
very sweet, i hope you showed this to her. |
by Unrequited
kinda corny, but maybe that's what people love about this poem! it could easily be a song |
Hey i liked this one ...keep up the great work 5/5 |