really good poem I think you should do somthing bigger at the end tho cuz it just seems like it cuts off

Awwl.. veyr cute! I cannot belive people gave it such a bad rating.. they are dumb lol. I like it alot. It was very cute. Your a great writer so keep up the good work it all rhymed fine. i gave it a 5 :-D~ xox Britney

I like it, but I feel it could use a few more stanzas to build up what you are trying to say about it.

I liked it, to be honest it's a bit low rated I feel. Keep it up:)

Hey i liked this one ...keep up the great work 5/5
luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

kinda corny, but maybe that's what people love about this poem! it could easily be a song

very sweet, i hope you showed this to her.

Eh. Pretty good. Keep working on it. (The uneven stanzas, mostly)

it stole my attention, very good! keep it up.