Good job! i really liked this and he will forgive you no matter what you've done. Great write keep it up!
Godbless,
erica*

The cool thing is... you don't even need to ask. He's already forgiven you. Isn't that awesome? I think it is. I'm proud of you... is that weird to say? Well, too bad. Because I am proud of you. You've done a lot for yourself...

Car

great poem!! i love it! keep up the amazing work.
-xXx-

Wonderful poem james.
I loved the meaning of it too.
thanks for mentioning my name
in you profile.
much love,
marjan