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by undying blusher
Beautiful...lovely flow and just plain sweet! "always and forever, I'll forever love you" ^ I would suggest one thing...to change that last line to something as, "always and forever, I shall love you." Since you just said forever...to repeat it so soon seems unnecessary...nice work, keep writing! xxx
by SweetSuicide
Wow awesome poem..you got talent..so keep wrting and posting..love you work..5/5