Awesome! That was so... good! I mean you had all the words.. at the right places.. i hope you know what I eman.

that is really good i like it a lot

WOW i really liked your poem!! it almost made me cry! but i don't get the end? wish it was more detailed!!

omg this poems OUT OF THE WORLD GREAT i think it relates to alot of ppl and thats a good thing

great details and was sweet. great job. check out my poems if ya get a chance. much appreicated if u do.

this poem is awesome and just keep it up. and sorry i dont know him.

Thx for comment my poem!!

I really like your poems.....you can write very well!!

Love ya too

5/5 great x