by Britney
Awwl.. thats so sad. Im sorrie that they r gone.. its funny because i have a poem called You're Gone also.. you can take a look if you want. That poem was excellent there was no flaws, it all fit together smoothly and i def. enjoyed reading it. Your a veyr talented writer and i plan to read more of ur work so keep it up. 5/5! |
Very, very sad. I'm sorry that it happened. I hope you stay strong and look forward. A great poem, overall flow and emotion were on the spot. Just beautiful. please keep writing ^_^x. |
that is so true. and i still wonder why me and my love fell apart. because i love him still with everything i am. |
by -Beauty-
This poem is sooo Real...u go girl...it hott..to tell u te truth i kinda shed a lil tear..cause my one love well....in over him now..but a year ago i wasnt n he left...n wen he went i dreamed lke that..i your poem....omg.....its sooo touching.......love is so strong..so is this poem |
by kat
This poem is amazing..im speechless.... |
Wow, beautful work here! Great job! keep it up:) |
by jamie ellen
Very nice it flowed very nicely with the repeated verse's |
by Gizmo
So sad :[ |