by Illusion Aug 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Blood trickles down my wrist, |
by why me
thats beautiful but kinda seems like you are doing it to your self |
another great poem and once again I know you pain, I relate so much!!! I hope that you are ok?? Great poem , i really love it... |
by natalie
I really like this poem, i think it would be ok though without having commas at the end on each line (not that it matters really) and gray is spelt grey, but i really like the poem and i love the bit about acid blood. its wonderful :D |