Cool poem, I like the structure of it very much and the lot of adjectives you used to described the colour and the mood made me think about it a bit. The lines " Slips like a breath of wind,
like the scent of snow," and "a gentle kiss...
and the sweet, mild, bland............
calm of death." are my fave ones, because I like the metaphors you build up and then the turning from love, so the kiss, to the dark and emotionless calm death.
Great write ~ very unique, keep it up

Bye, Sabine

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Thank you a lot.

that is why i my color is blue...teehee...yep kewl poem...blue...

Wow great poem, it was really good, 5/5

I loved this,.. such an ethereal feeling captured.. calm death certainly sums up the whole poem it seems, blue being the primary emotion.. i loved the advancements u made so subtlety.. i can totally envision all of this so vividly. i wish i could tell u theres anything wrong, but if there is, i havent found it.. thanx for the comment on danse macabre and an explanation was put if you'd like to check it out again,.. 5/5

What an original idea for a poem! A fantastic write!