that was really good. i know what you mean to. keep up the good work!
kelsey
xoxoxo

Reading this brought tears to my eyes. It is a stunningly beautiful poem, poignant and skillfully written. It also has good flow and pleasant rhyming.

Also, it is one of the very few poems in which the language usage is 100% accurate. It is something on which I personally place high importance. Judging from your writing, you do also.

This poem is truly outstanding.

wow... that's beautiful!!! i can feel your love through the poem. keep up the amazing work!
-xXx-

THis was an amazing poem. You did such a great job of ur use of language. 5/5. U have some talent! IF you can check mine out somtime i think you would liek them! ~Rach

Nice one