Liked it a lot, espacially the last line was a great end, the one question behind the whole poem, but also the rest of the poem was wondefully written. Espacially the second stanza is my favourite one.

I hope to read more such great stuff from you soon.
Lots of love
Sabine

P.S.: Please, read some work of mine and comment and vote, too. Thanks.

Yeah i totally relate with this one. I especially looove the lines:

"Everything that was shiny and gold
Has decayed to a dull brown"

Brilliant!

Ana*