Cool idea for a poem, and you are so right, women shouldn't let guys treat them bad, they are more worthy than that and it's only a matter of time till one finds the right one in love. The last stanza was my favourite, espacially "who tells you at night that your his only star" ~ so cute . :-)

Keep it up
Lots of love
Sabine

P.S.: Please, read some of my work and comment and vote, too. Thanks.

great poem i think there should be more women like you

Thanks for the comments.

Wow. I liked this poem. After you commented on my poem I decided to check out your poems. I really liked this one. If you ever want to e-mail me go for it. My e-mail is: krackerjax182@wmconnect.com My name is Kayla

Damn gurl, u write AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!