"breathes" should that be "breaths"? Or am I just grammatically incorrect?

You don't get as much recognition as you deserve. here you are, pouring your heart out in a unique and effective way whilst the rest of the teeny 'slit-my-wrist' poets are reading undeserving poetry.
I love your writing. You're amazing, you make me believe in love. Thank you for that.
I admire you.
So write more.

Ooooh, you are good! This evoked so many different emotions as I read it! You're an outstanding writer, quite unique unlike many on this site! Keep it up~Holly