Headphones loud

by *~Katie~*   Aug 8, 2005


Headphones loud
Parents screaming
Fathers fighting with daughters
Kids living unnoticed, unloved, forgotten
Bleeding on the inside
Broken on the out
Living strongly
Slowly braking down
Only one to love
No one else to know
Loud
Screaming,
Fighting,
Forgotten,
Bleeding,
Broken,
Dead and lost forever

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Uh, the flow wasn't the greatest, and I don't agree with the format, but I like the one word lines, those were pretty cool. I can't imagine this all happening though, it's not very descriptive. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by David McIntosh

    I gave this a 5, I hope it is not really like this because this poem broke my heart

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    That was very well written hun, very nice xoxox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by jessi

    I like it its powerfully emotional and means so much in such a little poem gets the message across good work xxxjessixxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    I love how you captured such a powerful idea in such few words. It's not long but it's very powerful. good job

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