Powerful, and i know what u mean !

It good, very loudly emotioned, and powerful, keep it up**

I love how you captured such a powerful idea in such few words. It's not long but it's very powerful. good job

I like it its powerfully emotional and means so much in such a little poem gets the message across good work xxxjessixxx

That was very well written hun, very nice xoxox Rach

I gave this a 5, I hope it is not really like this because this poem broke my heart

Uh, the flow wasn't the greatest, and I don't agree with the format, but I like the one word lines, those were pretty cool. I can't imagine this all happening though, it's not very descriptive. Keep up the good work.