wow that was REALLY good!

awesome po-hemenem. I really liked it and rated it 5. You have an awesome talent.

omg this is the most amazing poem i have ever read it almost made me cry because i relate to it so much i mean that is so incredable

keep it up plz chek out my poems it would mean a lot to me

yea i wonder about those things all the time. that was a great poem

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~*Christina*~

Wow, that was really awesome. Yea, sometimes I really do wonder about those things. I've thought about those things more recently than I ever have. But it was really great!

.:*-*Krissy*-*:.

An excellent poem. I have often wondered and experienced everything on your list. I have often tried to form this in my own words in poetry but have never happily succeeded. So i am glad you were able to. :) Very nice.
-A

I have felt that way many a time!! Great way to express it...good therapy!

hey. omg this poem is awesome. yeah i wonder too...
5/5. keep it up. i love your writing!

Woooooooouh!! i couldnt breathe while reading this.. i was afraid that while i breathe i miss a line.. ur very talented and i truly agree wid u in this poem kuz thats what we should wonder.. i do wonder why i was born wid this family not at her or his place.. life is weird in some way..thanku

Hi, thanks for your comment back.
I really love this poem but as I can see many people do.
I think we're sort of in the same position yeah, I haven't spoken my ''boyfriend'' a while now, and I don't know how he thinks about everything or what he feels. Everything changed, I just to manage pretty well but I'm falling back. The thoughts of he later with another woman or just that he doesn't loves me anymore. It kills me. I have been trough a lot now, and he was the last one who I thought would ever hurt me again. That's also what he said himself. I miss him very much and his friends says it such a big lost because he's really special but my friend say he hurts me to much and I should let it all go. I don't know what I think that's the problem now.
Anyway I wish you the best with ally our problems and things you have on your mind now, Just keep believing in yourself and do everything to reach your personal goals. Don't every again give your heart away 'Cause you can see what it can do to you.
Good luck, and keep on the good writing
If you want you can mail me.
Greets, Milou.

Good poem