Such a powerful poem full of deep emotions. Very well written as always you express your feelings so well in your poetry! Glad you're back writing. Take Care! Brooke~

I'm not good at being number two,
That's why I've gotten over you.
The only words that I take back,
Are the ones lacking honesty.

Loved those lines because I and many people I know have felt that way! This was a great poem and I really enjoy the way your write!! five from me!
~Chelsey~

thats really good!!!!! great job writting!!!!!! keep writting

This poem had a very strong ending you really finished it off nicely. Though to do a nice not rhyming poem it must flow naturally and this did except in a couple of places that kinda threw it off. But i really liked all the emotion, and details.

Great ending and lovely poem, I like alot of your work, keep writting and I'll keep reading!!! Lots O' Love
BloodRedRose

This was a great piece, I feel like in certain angles I can relate to it, its quite strange how i relate though. Nonetheless itsa very strong piece, i lvoe how easily you can convey your emotions through your words, its a very precious gift. Im extremely magnetized to your work, Im actually adding you to my faves. in return as well!