lol funny sorry to hear that you have had a bad day on the bus lol
and have fun at schoolz and enjoy it while you still can!

-Josiah

NICE! HAHAHAHAHA I've had quite a few crazy a-ss bus drivers....they can be fun. Nicely done!!!!!!!! Funny stuff! ;)

ha ha lovely! i don't have to go back to school until the end of this month! *thanks god* hope you have a good year ahead of you. you should have no problem passing english though. this poem just made me smile, you did great on it! i agree most bus drivers have those problems!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Haha sounds like ur bus driver cud be alot of fun. I really like the senryu structure coz it's different to most other things except Haikus which I can't write to save my life lol. This poem is really clever. 5/5

Em xx

Sounds like the bus ride from hell; Plus the craziest driver.
Nice work sweet.

Luvoo heaps,
- Kal.

lol that's funny! Hey girl I'm gonna post something right now so go so we can talk! Helloooo?

great poem, i totally love it! my little cuz lives in the us and is jus starting 8th grade soon. I've never been on an american school bus. neways, love the poem. keep it up, 5/5.

Oh my god, we have the same bus driver! maybe not, being in different states and all, but still i laughed so hard keep it up

Ari,

I'm in stitches, just loved this one. Good work!

Warmest regards,

Steve

Very cute and absolutely hilarious. Good job!

Oh, i'm recalling those golden days of riding the bus. my bus driver was cool and gave out candy, but one time we had a 'sub' bus driver and she looked like satan.. nice poem:)