by ├Truely_Spoken┤ Aug 8, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
© Francisco Guzman 2005 |
by Lyn
Absolutely brilliant! This poem stirred emotions in me.Such a triumph! I was soaring with the Phoenix by the end and felt such a sense of boundless optimism and hope and strength.A privilege to read.It's hard to believe you are 16, there is a maturity to your writing but also a youthful exuberance. |
by Dahna
I wish I could rate this as a 100 = (, oh well jus' multiply my five by 20 when you look at it = ) |
by Brookeღ
Very well written with great word choice! Beautifully done! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by ~*Chelsea*~
Love ur poem its wicked |
by Lalala
v.v.good |