wow ! nice poem its really really good

wow great poem!! i love it 5/5
luv courtie

uhhhhhhhh....what can i say.......maybe.....WOW!!!

'you cannot bury in flames, what was born within them' I really liked that line.... Amazing poem

outstanding

Really good, I loved the ending.

wow that was a real nice poem you should go pro n you have a real talent keep up the great job

v.v.good

Love ur poem its wicked

Very well written with great word choice! Beautifully done! Take Care! Brooke~

I wish I could rate this as a 100 = (, oh well jus' multiply my five by 20 when you look at it = )

Absolutely brilliant! This poem stirred emotions in me.Such a triumph! I was soaring with the Phoenix by the end and felt such a sense of boundless optimism and hope and strength.A privilege to read.It's hard to believe you are 16, there is a maturity to your writing but also a youthful exuberance.