lol thanks 4 what ya said well i comment on ya poems coz there good so there no need to thank me:) this poem rocks im sure you will find some one u feel like that about ya 14 n got loads of time just like me lol :P keep the good work up *5*

o sorry cuz i went to vote a five because this is maybe one of my favorite ones you've ever done but i am multitasking on my computer right now and it's 9:00 in the morning and i'm really sore an tired and i acidentally voted a 4! sorry!!!! love this poem i really like the lines about the dove. there was one part that went something like

everytime i look you< you have to add the word "at" between look and you. other then that it's great

i really like the dove line you have in it about it flying around your heart.

~jacklyn

ha ok blonde moment on my part i did vote you a five. the rating was 4.5 when i voted now it's a 4.6. some odd reason i thought it was a rating of 4.8. now i feel better and totally blonde because i did vote you a five and brought the rating up and not down ha ha ha.

~Jacklyn