That was a wonderful poem. It didn't have to rhyme. I liked it the way it was. It's very true and it made a lot of sense. Thanks for commenting on mine, it means a lot. Keep writing and take care!

Hey gurl dont worry if it didnt ryhme it was still great!!and everything in it was true!!=) ppl have to learn how to take things as they come.though not all things are easy 2 handle!!!!=)
take care i'll bee waiting 4 more of your poemz

Thanks for the comment on my poem, i liked this one it was really uplifting and stuff. Nice to see sumone with a positive outlook!!!