It was good, I would have liked it more had it rhymed, I personally prefer rhyming poems, but it was well enough, as is.

This was nice but not really as strong as some of your others. I liked how it ended. Very nicely ended. And yes sometimes strange is good (in response to what you said earlier). But as I had said it had been the word choice otherwise I had no real problem with it.
~FotF

wow, great poem
I loved it...really long...really great
Great job

DFK

wow.. really sad.. and good. 5/5

I love it it is great really you have talent great job

It is really goood i think that is all i can say i think the poem speakes 4 it self you can read mine if you want it is called shadow

Excellent poem... it was really good i lliked it

That is really good!

This poem was well done! =) Keep it up!

This poem was well done! =) Keep it up!

Wow tht made me cry, sooo good!!!
xox

Very well written and full of emotion

5/5

This poem is great i really like it. it has so much sadness in it and it almost made me cry. good job keep it up and take care.

I loved it
very emotional
great job
xxxx

Love this poem, it is really good! x

Great poem! I loved it because it was so powerful and full of emotion, I was almost on the verge of tears. Excellent job. 5/5

(Thank you for your comment on my poem! xxx)

What a great poem
your poems have so much meaning everyone can read them and feel a little something

i like reading your poems keep it up

lana
5/5

Wow, thats good, i'm putting you as a favorite

Thanks