by Jin Hui Aug 9, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
When you walked right pass me |
by Mark
hey great poem! the whole fishing thing is really effective 5/5 and thnx 4 ur comment |
by Sourav
yeah it's cute! Hey frnd you write well! Keep it up!! You can check mine if u want. |
OH MY GOSHi love it.. the whole fishing idea is realli cute.. keep it up |
by *~CaSsYa~*
OMG, jst loved ur poem!!!! U kno... *sob,sob*... i feel that way with this person too.. he (for me) sometimes ignores me too... or jst walk past me without a smile or a hi... i wonder if he really loves me.. well keep it up, i liked the "fishing" idea. |