Fishing (weird, i know)

by Jin Hui   Aug 9, 2005


When you walked right pass me
Without a hi
When you looked right through me
Without a smile

My heart just stopped beating
And the pain that I was feeling
Could not be more agonizing

But I have no reason to be angry
I guess I’m just another lonely fish
Swimming in the dark and cold sea

I will keep on swimming until I find that light
The one that warms and illuminates the whole ocean floor
And make all the lonely fishes someone’s white knight

Until then, I suggest you go fishing with warm bait
Maybe with a little determination and patience
You and I could be each other’s perfect mate

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mark

    hey great poem! the whole fishing thing is really effective 5/5 and thnx 4 ur comment

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    yeah it's cute! Hey frnd you write well! Keep it up!! You can check mine if u want.

  • 19 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    OH MY GOSHi love it.. the whole fishing idea is realli cute.. keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by *~CaSsYa~*

    OMG, jst loved ur poem!!!! U kno... *sob,sob*... i feel that way with this person too.. he (for me) sometimes ignores me too... or jst walk past me without a smile or a hi... i wonder if he really loves me.. well keep it up, i liked the "fishing" idea.

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