Short but sweet...I like it too. See...different can be good ;)

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I really like this! Thanks for commenting on my poems! I appreciate it! Great job on this!

Thats a GREAT poem!!!!! It is really really really good written and i like reading your stuff! you are a great writer and im glad u do write!

That such a sweet poem, very touching.
~Smile Always~
Gina

That was such a sweet poem. I liked how you wrote it and the outline of it. Very nice. Great job on this. You are very talented. Keep up the great work. Take care. Peace. 5/5

this is so good i love it I can feel the meaning keep it up 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

I liked it until "Let me be your knife", that paragraph and the next one was so so, then it got good again. Just didn't feel any flow during those two paragraphs.

Best wishes,
Patrik

hey thats heaps sweet, i love it!
keep it up :D
5/5
- xXlostXx

Aw that's sweet, i really like it.
Well Done.

<3 Charli XxX

Wow i really liked that poem. I wrote one similar to that but i never posted it :P but i really liked the rhythm and the ending. Good job and keep it up.

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Good poem make sure u check out mines!!

Hey, that was so sweet. I really liked it.
see ya!

I love this poem, it says a lot of things that I would love to say to someone. The only thing that bugged me was all the repitition. Maybe you could tone it down a bit? Just a suggestion :-) But I love the concept.

Take Care,
Renee

I really liked this poem. The structure was very nice. I loved the second and third stanzas the most. it was very very well written, good job!

This was great the idea was well developed and i loved thed repitition pattern that used it was very clever and made the poem flow very well good job

I liked it but the contrast didnt make sense. great rhythm though.

Hey, I absolutely love this one... You have great talent. Thanks for the comments and keep writing!

That is so sad! i luved it

A strong message ang a great style that brought forth the best of your message. Unique and powerful!

Hey that was good i liked it thanxz for commenting my poem keep writing PEACE!