Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

Aw i like this poem, it's really well written.
Well Done !!!

<3 Charli XxXxXxXx

very nice flow and i liked your word choice to describe your feelings and thoughts. i can definitely related. nice job!!

Sara