awwwwwwwww very deep emotion but with a point love ti keep it up

love andrea xxxx

very emotional and heartfelt. I especially enjoyed your fifth stanza. its something i have been through so many times. keep it up

wow... beautiful, yet heartbreaking. im really sorry this happened. but if she can't see what a talented and amazing guy you are, then the girl that does see that in you is still out there. amazing poem!!! you truly are talented. keep it up!
-xXx-

Aww, i really like this, it's a really beautiful poem and is really well constructed and written.

<3 Charli XxX

That is a really good poem, very well written and the lines rang together very well, it was sad but a very good poem I liked it alot, 5/5

Fab work ! I liked it a lot, because the turning between cute new love at the beginning to lost love at the end was goody created . The idea with a hole in one's heart was also cool and great that you related the last line of your poem again to that "Hole in the heart" theme, that fits perfectly to the whole poem . The sixth stanza was my fave one.

Lots of love
Sabine

P.S. : Please, comment and vote on some work of mine, too. That would mean a lot to me . Thanks.

aw.. this is soo cute.. but soo sad... hope your heartbrake heals soon.. lol =p

wow dude the same happened to me i so know how u feel!

wow..........you have awesome poems here.........so much talent......you know how to express yourself.....i love this poems.....shit, I love all your poems.....keep up the great work....thank you so much for reading/rating/messaging my poem it really means a lot to me....ur welcome to read more....
XOXO
!*!Bee!*!

I liks this poem. It's tuff when you love some one who doesn seem to love you back

Aww i hope she soon feels the same as u.
and like u said to me....
i hope u find someone as special as YoU!

i didnt want to go out with him,
cause i didnt want to become like him,
with the things that he done and yeh...
i was startin to think that wat he was doin in his life like drugs... was more important then me.
and im goin through a really hard time at the moment and i just need a friend or someone to tell me that they love me,
and actually mean it from there heart not just say it for the sake of sayin it.
im scared!
alot of things are happenin in my life at the moment,
my best fren is in the hospital, his got somethin wrong with his head,
my nan is really sick,
i feel dumb for dumpin alex(my boyfren)
but i kno i had to do it...
and im not gettin along with one of my frens from school.....
so i need someone to tell me from there heart that they love me and they are always here for me,
and i was hopin alex would be the one to say it, but i was wrong....
sooooo yeh...
sorry for sayin this to u,
u probably dont wanna hear it.
sorry...

wellz great poem! keep it up.
and please reply to me as soon as u get this..
thanks for being there mark!

love always sam xoxo