great poem. very well written. keep it up! u can check out some of my poems if u want.

I love the details :-)

Another amazing poem! just to prove you wrong Ivve written 4/5 more poems. So Meh! If you ever need me feel free to talk to me.
Love Scarlet xxxxxxxx

Brilliant poem, sorry that you felt so bad, perhaps you should tell someone that you feel this bad, it can help you know, wish I could make you better, cant wait to see you, good poem, well done, love you
xxx

wonderful poem, so sad bt full of emotion and power. i loved it 5/5 xxx keep writin and stay strong, ur poems r special :)

This is the best poem ive ever read... its beautiful....
xxxx
abby
p.s. the details make it so much better!