If only you new i love you

by nicola   Aug 9, 2005


If only you new
i really love you

i love you in every way
if only i could just say

i love the way you smile at me
can't you see

i love the way you catch my eyes
i just wish you would stop telling all these lies

i love the way you have a wicked laugh
the type you can't help but smile when you here it

i love your deep brown eyes
but i hate saying the goodbyes

i love the way you look at me
as i think we where meant to be

if only you new or even had a clue
that i can't stop thinking of you

if only you new
i want to kiss your tempting lips

if only you new
how much i love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by nicola

    thanks guys.im a rubbish speller so sorry about that ill ty to fix it.

    thanks riot i will edit it now i couldnt think of anything to put so i just said pies lol.thanks again guys i will rate and comment your poems now

  • 19 years ago

    by Emotionless Riot

    This poem was really cute, and i'm in the same situation at the moment, which is why it meant a lot to me.
    As a tip, i reckon you could have put a bit more thought into the rhyming. What i mean is, as an example, you could have so many more rhymes with 'eyes', not just 'pies.' My advice to you is to think long and hard about a meaningful deep rhyme to each line. Put your heart and soul into each poem. You'll learn to love you work if you do. It was a great poem, though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    good poem, some parts aren't spelled correctly but i understood what you meant, and don't worry not every poem everyone writes is always good, but anyways good job, I liked it alot, 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by **Ashley**Loves**Justin**H.**

    this poem iis good. and just keep it up. and not all my poems are that great eigther.

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