this poem iis good. and just keep it up. and not all my poems are that great eigther.

good poem, some parts aren't spelled correctly but i understood what you meant, and don't worry not every poem everyone writes is always good, but anyways good job, I liked it alot, 5/5.

This poem was really cute, and i'm in the same situation at the moment, which is why it meant a lot to me.
As a tip, i reckon you could have put a bit more thought into the rhyming. What i mean is, as an example, you could have so many more rhymes with 'eyes', not just 'pies.' My advice to you is to think long and hard about a meaningful deep rhyme to each line. Put your heart and soul into each poem. You'll learn to love you work if you do. It was a great poem, though.

thanks guys.im a rubbish speller so sorry about that ill ty to fix it.

thanks riot i will edit it now i couldnt think of anything to put so i just said pies lol.thanks again guys i will rate and comment your poems now