by mandieD Aug 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Insignificant, a petal on a flower, a raindrop in a storm. |
by Truest Lies
Very deep, with a realisticaly sad edge to it. Perhaps you should call it Insignificant. |
by NannO
awww. that was nice.. it was v deep.. nice end.. |
by Patrik
Great poem, but perhaps devide it in to more lines, where all the -> , . ! <- etc are you should break to a new line, makes it better.. I think anyways, but we all have different styles:) |