Comments : Taking A Breath, My Attempt At Suicide

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    as i read this i got goosebumps. youre a great writer, you told me in the chat that you think your poems suck because no one comments, i think no one comments because by the time there done reading your poems, their speachless. i think this is you sadest but your best poem. keep writing because you are really good!

  • 19 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    Hey thanx for the comment on my poem, I have attempted suicide myself, and the only reason I'm still here, is because of my loving friends. I really like this poem, its really good!! Keep on writing!

    ~*Amber*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    Oh...I'm so sorry this is true. Does that sound corny??? I don't care about that because I really am sorry that this happened to you. I've never had the courage to go down deep enough but I don't know if I want to die that way anyways. Something easier....a gun or something....something...

    5/5!!!

    Excellent poem. Keep it up.

    Check out some of my poems if you can. Really appreciate that.

  • 19 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    thats deep.. and sad
    hang on girly
    cutting aint worth it..trust i know from experience..u shud read my poem A girl..TRUE STORY!!...its about me and cutting...maybe it will change ur mind..hope it does

    stay strong im here for ya
    -angel-

  • 19 years ago

    by why me

    hey that was awsume but sad.....you should read some of mine you mike like them
    5/5