another sad poem this one also was a very sadful pem it was very good I hope things are well with you and things will get better!

-Josiah

i love you poems lol

i love you poems lol

This was a very good poem i dont know who or what that was about but sometimes i feel that way too.

Awwl.. great Job i only have one suggestion.. Instead of saying

"A little girl I am not!"
maybe say I'm not a little girl.. becuase saying it that way makes the flow a little weird. 4/5

Good flow, 5/5.

very well written!! i enjoyed all of it, although its sad, but smile :) sometimes its the only thing that keeps the people who love you sane! 5/5!!!

hey great poem i liked it xxx

Magnificent! Superb! Breathtaking! (I ran out of words, so I'm using the Thesaurus now! lol) But really, great poem!