by Kayla Aug 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The tears I cry, |
by Ashley
Wonderful darlin'!!! Loved it!!! Love you!!!! |
Touching poem... |
by Sarah Ann
Aww that was really touching. Excellent job hun. xxx |
ohhh thats such a good poem, keep your head up kayla, remember there are alwayz better things happening, remember also if you keep your head down then you let the bigger and better things pass you by, great job! 5/5!!! |
by Minkus
This was good, but not great. The rhythym of the rhyming lines wasn't great. 4/5. |