very nice poem it is said and very well put the flow was nice Very good jobz

-Josiah

great poem it kinda has a thing of what im going through right now lol i cried a lil

Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still liked it.

good poem. keep it up

This was good, but not great. The rhythym of the rhyming lines wasn't great. 4/5.

ohhh thats such a good poem, keep your head up kayla, remember there are alwayz better things happening, remember also if you keep your head down then you let the bigger and better things pass you by, great job! 5/5!!!

Aww that was really touching. Excellent job hun. xxx

Touching poem...

Thank you for all the comments :)

xxx

Wonderful darlin'!!! Loved it!!! Love you!!!!