Comments : The pain you caused me

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    I think for your fist poem that's really good. I can relate a lot to it. I hope you keep writing..you got some talent. Thanks for the comment :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Liz

    Omg that is such a great poem!!! I like the repetition it makes the poem sound very good! Keep up the amazing work!