For a random write this isn't horrible. It's really good. Don't we all wish for a painless death...the only way for that though is having to die in your sleep or something similar to that.

Well anyways keep it up.

5/5

very well writen..... it wasnt horrible..... it was quite good..... it had a intact depth.... and was easy to follow..... it was a mad job...... i liked reading it.....

crystal

aww darl..im here for ya..and this aint a horrible write...i like it alot!!..ur talented:)

luv ya
angel
5/5 always

This poem was faaaar from horrible .. and if u just randomly wrote it .. i look forward to reading nething u might put ur mind to .. hehe .. nicee ... 5/5