Dying Butterflies

by Nicholle   Aug 9, 2005


There is a beautiful,
vibrant,
swiftly soaring,
butterfly

It's wings move,
As it slowly soars,
across the baby blue sky

Such a magnificent sight,
the butterfly,
is pure blissfulness to the eye

But what is the butterfly,
without it's wings,
all it's beauty,
gone

With one touch,
It slowly falls,
crippled little butterfly

Gently falling,
Like a leaf,
slowly hitting the ground

The butterfly,
with all beauty lost,
just lays there

Dying butterflies,
to the floor,
fluttering,
to a careless dance

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Good job on this poem, it has good imagery and flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    I liked it coz it's different! I must say you've written it nicely!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Syn

    Very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job a describing one thing in many ways. thanks for your comment

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a beautiful poem...especially the meaning to this goes deep as a person crippled with suffering... wow !
    im in awe of this poem
    5/5
    amy