In A Pit

by Jesika   Aug 9, 2005


Down Down it's all black,
I can't see I can't breath,
Can Someone bring me back,
You told me to go I had to leave,
I could be gone but now I'm dead,
Simple things you could've said,
You heard my death with screams,
Now its not just how it should seem,
You made me a sinner,
My morals and life a whole lot thinner,
You did that to me,
Just so you could soon see,
You killed me bloody and sent me to hell,
I'm gone now who you gonna tell?
You had me running through life,
Sudden stop with a slashing knife,
Slap to reality.... not where I am,
Help me now! I've learned my lesson,
I know this was your plan,
Was it not fun?
I'm in a pit, darkness, scared, and alone,
I see a white dot up above,
The walls seem to have grown,
You took my body here....
Then with just a shove,
I couldn't cry a single tear,
Your the demand from below,
No One else knows,
They'll never know,
Till You get another,
Damn it! don't you do it again!
I'm eternally here,
No feelings of fear,
Just burning eternally,
No One else will ever see...

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  • 19 years ago

    by David

    thats a damn good poem... its amazing what poems like these can make you feel
    Well done

  • 19 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    very nice. The pit represents your trapped soul within yourself, correct?