by bucky Aug 9, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I see the leaves beginning to fall |
good, i can see the colors as i read it. |
by NannO
i thot that was full of sentiment.. i lykd ur wording.. |
by jencam
Fall has always been my favorite season also. Very nice job, nice detail. |
by crystal
beautiful poem. i really enjoyed it. great job. |
by Kelsey
It's pretty good but the rhymes scheme was a little uneven, especially in the third stanza. I like the idea though. |