ok ok it was a good poem but it needs to flow better you know but it's a goods free write!
xoxox

I like the fact that you dedicate this to your bf... lord knows i dedicate a LOT to my bf...good job on the poem but yea it needs to flow just a lil better but its still a good one...thnx for your comment and you should read some of my others and tell me what you think =]...
~Sandra~