wow... i knoww exactly how you feel it sux... never thort i cud hav as bad a tym as las yr but so far this years turnin out 2 b able 2 manage it... if ya need tlk im ere xxx

Nice poem, u have a sort of writing skill that will soon develop into a very powerfull voice,, it feels to me that ur stuk in a sort of writersblock,, i have been there, but know that iam older iam better at writing,, cheak out some of mine**

doz an1c me?

"try" (in the third line) should be "tried" and in the sixth line "brake" should be "break". You have some interesting ideas and you ended this with one thats out of the box. Try to add in some punctuation hun and keep writing!!

I like it and i know how that feels just hang in there xoxox Rach