I'm so sorry about your friend. That was really sad. It was a very good poem, though. Sometimes our best work comes out in those "spur of the moment" times. Stay strong and hang in there. Take care.

I agree with Kiesha!! Lol, im sorry too, and it was a great poem. Thank you for your comment ~Peace and Love~

Hi i gave u 5/5 for it... nice poem... the last stanza doent rhyme but , well not all poems need to rhyme...
well written !
enjoyed reding it
love
amelia

Great poem... it really explains how im feeling about someone right know.. Good Job!