My Fait

by *~Katie~*   Aug 10, 2005


I’m afraid of the pain it brings
But I’ll do it anyways
I don’t want to have to do this
But I can’t be strong if no one will try to help
No one will try to talk to me
Or see what's really there
So please try to see through the fakeness
Try to help some one u hate
Be a good person for once in your life
Come help chose my fait

plz read, rate, and post....it would be nice to get some feedback

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  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Will I like it on matter how it is written, it was from your heart, xoxox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Honestly, I don't like it. 'Anyways' is not exactly a poetic word, its slang and 'fait' has no definiation other than being a surname so i prosume you meant 'fate'. You had some good ideas that you could definatly build off another time but try introducing metaphors, similies and the like into your work, experiment with your words.

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    I think this poem has great potensial,, just think about it more, and choise ur words better so that they rhime better, but i give it a 4/5,, u can read my poems, and tell me what u think,, tnx* lots lof love,, doz an1c me?

  • 18 years ago

    by *-*PoisonedSoul~_~

    Good poem... not ur best but still good!

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