That was a very good poem!! I realyenjoyed reading it! Please check out my poems! thanx
xoxo
emmy

I think you just broke my heart a little bit... let me just check... yep.

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. But this poem was awesome! Great job with everything very talented. 5/5! and you should show your dream girl this . xox Britney xox

I loved the last stanza! I wish my dreams would come true as well. Your poetry has been so sad I hope things will look start looking up for you. You deserve the best you have such a big heart. Keep posting I have missed reading your work! ~Brooke~

Great job explaining your feelings & emotions through the words. Very descriptive. Keep it up & check out some of mine if you get a chance.
-Kate

i really like that poem. it's so sweet. and very well written. keep up the good work.
crystal

This is sweet. your did a amazing job i feel like that before for a guy. but sometimes dreams do come true only to find out that it was not the dream that you thought it would be. 5.5

Aww that was soo sweet. It ended so perfect and beautifully, I once felt like this too...It was a wonderful read.

I really loved this poem...Matter of a fact I like all your poems ...You have a unique style of writing...Its excellent...I will keep reading if you keep on writing...Keep it up...Take care, jen...p.s.thanks for the comment on my poem...it meant alot to me!

Omg, that is so sweet! any guy that would say that to me would totally be in the running :) that was so sweet. good luck with this girl

HOLLY CRAP! thats really, really good better than i could ever do!

Sitting down in class,
Staring into space.
I see the stars ahead,
I’ll wish to leave this place.
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Woot! I found one. =] And, I loved that stanza. Kinda reminds me of when I was in school and I'd sit in class and see the guy I liked [who now is my best friend] walk past, And I'd be like *droools* Lol. It was a really sweet poem. And I liked how you -didn't- make the words rhyme perfectly, you made them near rhymed :/ if that makes sense. Anywho. Awesome job!! 5/5

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AWWWWWW!!! I LOVED THIS ONE!! Amazing...Just Amazing!! You Blow Me Away With Every Word That You Say!!!
My Two Favorite Stanzas Were:

You’re always on my mind,
It happens all the time.
I just want to be with you.
You say dream on and
Dreaming is what I’ll do.
--->That's So Cute I Loved How You Worded It :D

If only dreams came true.
I’d spend eternity with you.
Things aren’t what they seem,
But you’re the girl of my dreams.
---> Im Amazed At How You Ended It! It Was Brilliant! Just Brilliant

The Flow Was Amazing Your A Great Poet And You Should Be Proud Of Yourself! 5/5
Love,
Steph