Sounds like a long-needed final good-bye...real break up.... I really like this one. Good work.

"I dint want your candies" - *don't?

xxx

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This is so how I been feeling latly my ex is driving me mad with his sorry's last night I wouldn't talk to him then he yelled at me saying I was using him then I ran off and later he's fill of sorry's I hate it so much, but this poem is so great!!!!

Expressed so well and the flow was great. This poem reminded me of an ex boyfriend of mine I felt the same way. In fact I said similar things to him. Very well done! Take Care! Brooke~

this is a great poem. i like it alot. and thanks for the comments on mine. it means a lot when i get feed back from other poem writters. and all my poems are true and about one special person to me.

awsome write!

that was super good thanxz for the comment

i can definitely relate to this poem, great job. it flowed really well and explained exactly the idea of the poem. keep it up 5/5

nice poem............how i wish i could learn your way of letting go,and forgetting the person.keep on writing!!!!

Hey it's great! Another fab poem from you. I like these type of poems, i've only got a few love ones and they are nowhere near as good as yours! lol!

i like it very weel writen keep it up ^.^

check out mine sometime <3<3

Good poem make sure u check out mines!!

Hey hun. It's yo sis. I thought that was so awesome but it better not be about Adam.lol But if you did write it for someone I can get an idea of who it's for.lov u lots xoxo