kool it was full of emoition and confusion

Beautifully written your relationships remind me so much of mine. Brings back memories! Another good one! Brooke =)

great write thx for r/c on mine keep writting your in my favs!

very cute and good poem, liked it alot:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

I think this is a wonderful poem. I think you did an amazing job of expressing yourself in this one. Your man is obviously very special to you. If you get a chance check out some of my poems.

wow i liked this one a lot, especially because it was my situation about 2 weeks ago and you did a very good job of expressing the feelings involved. great job, it was very well written and i loved the ending...it summed everything up really well. 5/5 take care

Sara

Aww i like this poem, shows your feelings well. Poems that relate to you are always good! Keep up the great work and keep on writing

gurl u are so good at this don't ever let any one tell you any differant

Good poem make sure u check out mines!!

Aww girl this is sweet and I know it's not about Adam cuz yall don't fight. But it's really sweet. Lov u. xoxo
SUMMER '05

That's such a sweet ending! Good flow...and I think a lot of couples can relate...

xxx

Hey good poem i like the meaning. i feel that way and m glad sum1 put it into words tht will hepl me explain it everyone u did an awsome job n i giva u props 5/5