This poem was great, and you said you were a beginner, this must be that advanced beginner stuff! lmbo! You really did well in this poem. You better keep up the great work! Thanx for the comments on my stuff too. We an help each other!

-Frank

awww thats gorgeous

yea for a starter you are a fantastic writer

really good same as i said before xxx

OOO,, get ur slang on guurl, lol, jk
That was cool, and I ACTAULLY understood it (not very good in slang, lol) Good poem with a nice message :)

~Peace And Love~
Francisco

That was really really good, keep it up.

HEY THIS ONE IS *REALLY* GOOD I LOVED IT GAVE IT A 5/5 ... IF U HAVE TIME CHECK OUT MINE PLZ

this is ur best poem yet...this is how all girls feel when there relationship starts going rocky..listen this is how i felt rite b4 me and mi ex broke up but its ok there are other guys but still this is mi favorite poem of urs its great!