Well I don't know how that is but I'm sure it must be really hard. and whereever he is I bet your in his heart too..
I got the rest of your comments..thanks. and I sent you a message I hope you got it.
Christina

"because of him is how i cope" - I think you should rearrange this line somehow...maybe something like "because of him I am able to cope." The line doesn't really make sense the way you worded it, though I can understand what you mean.

"he born to me in my young life
in my heart it cuts like a knife
he was took from me so very young"

*he was born...
*he was taken...

Nice work. You have a certain style, short and rhyming...it's good, but it could use some work...

xxx