I CRY OUT FOR YOUR HELP

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Aug 10, 2005


I need help,
Show me the light,
I won't survive long,
For I am stuck in my own dark alley tonight.

Please James,
Cut me down from this rope,
That is suffocating me,
And restricting me from hope.

Please James,
Come quick,
Find the medicine,
For I'm becoming sick.

Please James,
Open these blood shot eyes,
Clear them,
And show me where the right path lyes.

Please James,
Wake me from this nightmare,
Rescue me,
From all thoughts of despair.

Please James,
Stop me from crying,
Save me,
For I am slowly dieing.

Please James,
The poison is spreading fast,
Find the anti-venom,
For I don't know how long I can last.

I need you,
More then you know,
Because right now I can't pick myself up,
From this desperate low.

Please rate and comment I'll try to return the favor

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Omg that brought tears to my eyes i can relate to this...it was very very sad but it was very well written..i don't know if it's true! but if it is well -hugs- lol if not, it was a great story!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kyleene

    I really like this poem. It is very good. The poem flows nicely. Good job! I love reading your poems.

    ~Kyleene~

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Wow i like this a lot very sad but absolutely fantastic i love the last stanza

    I need you,
    More then you know,
    Because right now I can't pick myself up,
    From this desperate low.

    it just finishes it so well well done
    LOve and Smiles
    Ally x

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This is a very good poem, just like your other ones. You're a very good poet. Great Job.

    --*NaydeeN*

  • 18 years ago

    by xlovelostx

    Yeah I know you have to want to stop yourself and I really like what you said it makes a lot of sense and I guess I'm just not ready to let go of the past yet. I'm not fully recovered...... I just told my b/f last night about it and he totally doesn't understand but I felt like it was something I didn't want to hide from him anymore. If you have aim and ever want to talk my name is xl0vinaimlesslyx that's a zero no an o! Good poem by the way!!!!!
    -Sarah

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